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                    I love this!
                
                    
    
  
                
                    posted by
                    CRShelley
                     on April 24, 2008 at 3:48 PM
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                I like the rambling flow of this poem. It reminds me of spontaneous prose.  
                
                    posted by
                    jmh256
                     on April 24, 2008 at 3:45 PM
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 I love it! Do you identify with it, love

I do. It's a creative piece. I like the 
bing bang ink I mean link.  
                
                    posted by
                    BC-A
                     on April 24, 2008 at 2:59 PM
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                    posted by
                    RomaKay
                     on April 24, 2008 at 2:47 PM
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                Poignant thoughts!  sam  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on April 24, 2008 at 2:24 PM
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                    Jessica
                
                          Interesting collage of thoughts…      
                
                    posted by
                    Troosha
                     on April 24, 2008 at 1:34 PM
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