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Very nice

posted by writing4love on April 24, 2008 at 12:56 AM | link to this | reply

a well written wannabe poem that moves.

posted by BC-A on April 23, 2008 at 7:38 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Samantha39 on April 23, 2008 at 2:21 PM | link to this | reply

Very passionate!  sam

posted by sam444 on April 23, 2008 at 2:11 PM | link to this | reply

very heartfelt anaphora...

posted by FineYoungSinger on April 23, 2008 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

agreed-this is written so beautifully

posted by bumpsinaroad on April 23, 2008 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on April 23, 2008 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply