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Re: Nice
I was inviting a girl to hold my hand and after being mesmerized by this poem for a couple of months she realized that she enjoyed drugs more than holding my hand.
posted by
writing4love
on April 25, 2008 at 10:21 AM
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Nice
Short, sweet, and simple. May I ask who's hand you're holding?
posted by
fluidbeauty
on April 25, 2008 at 8:35 AM
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beautiful poem, like an intimate conversation with the one you want to love. Great post!
:-) 
posted by
Sinome
on April 23, 2008 at 8:30 PM
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I join my hand with yours and here is love from my
to your
.
posted by
cmhnord
on April 23, 2008 at 5:54 PM
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Really nice poem! Very good job!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 23, 2008 at 12:29 PM
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Rather charming! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 23, 2008 at 7:46 AM
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posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 23, 2008 at 4:02 AM
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sincere emotional
posted by
BC-A
on April 23, 2008 at 3:53 AM
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Re: Nice
Thanks for the help.
posted by
writing4love
on April 23, 2008 at 1:45 AM
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Nice
But I think you meant "accept" my hand. Ytpos hapepn.
posted by
Halfelven
on April 23, 2008 at 12:24 AM
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