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Perfect description .. Grace Kelly was aptly named .....
Grace is like a soft, sheer magic covering a person wears that illuminates and calms……
Their face is open and smiling with eyes radiating utter acceptance of….whatever is……
Their hands are bare and open…outward, ready to accept and handle….whatever comes...
Their feet are firm and steady, but their knees are flexed, able to bend and absorb change.

posted by VictoriaP on May 6, 2008 at 6:43 PM | link to this | reply

Perfect description .. Grace Kelly was aptly named .....
Grace is like a soft, sheer magic covering a person wears that illuminates and calms……
Their face is open and smiling with eyes radiating utter acceptance of….whatever is……
Their hands are bare and open…outward, ready to accept and handle….whatever comes...
Their feet are firm and steady, but their knees are flexed, able to bend and absorb change.

posted by VictoriaP on May 6, 2008 at 6:40 PM | link to this | reply

Wow, wonderful account ~ you write prose/poetry with such ease and quality...I like it ~ write on!!! ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 23, 2008 at 9:42 PM | link to this | reply

A prose poem for sure!
It is strange, is it not, the imaginings we have walking in the woods, enveloped by the woodland smells?


Carl Peter


posted by cpklapper on April 23, 2008 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

It was the grace of God. A soft blanket of protection in times of fear. I like this development. It could still be a poem in journal form.  sam

posted by sam444 on April 23, 2008 at 7:22 AM | link to this | reply