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Good style and rhyming
posted by
adventurer02
on July 13, 2015 at 1:19 AM
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Beautiful!
posted by
Nautikos
on April 23, 2008 at 6:21 AM
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An excellent way to wake!
I liked the magical effect this poem made me feel...Great post!
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 22, 2008 at 8:06 PM
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This is very peaceful write. good job
posted by
Nitewulf
on April 22, 2008 at 2:22 PM
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I'm not a morning person, but this poem might change my mind.
posted by
jmh256
on April 22, 2008 at 1:39 PM
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Love this.....your work is magical.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on April 22, 2008 at 12:55 PM
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That is a fine way to awaken. Wonderful imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 22, 2008 at 12:24 PM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 22, 2008 at 12:13 PM
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Lovely work
Capturing the whispy flavors of half awakening
posted by
Kobriel
on April 22, 2008 at 8:45 AM
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Half
I love mornings (my favourite time of day). What a lovely "morning" poem.
posted by
Troosha
on April 22, 2008 at 8:27 AM
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