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great Tanka ~ great visual --- Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 21, 2008 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply

I could see them, great work!  sam

posted by sam444 on April 21, 2008 at 3:54 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely and meaningful verse

posted by Katray2 on April 21, 2008 at 1:18 PM | link to this | reply

See, within a very short time we both thought of fireworks! Thanks so much for your comment on 'paradise'. I will write about the trips I plan to take over the next six months in Turkey.

posted by vogue on April 21, 2008 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

Very well put!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on April 21, 2008 at 9:45 AM | link to this | reply

Great Poem

posted by Kolekshuns on April 21, 2008 at 9:11 AM | link to this | reply

100% Me hi sir...i love fireworks sir!im just doing the rounds for my mom again...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on April 21, 2008 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply