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I'm with FineYoungSinger...
"I splint my arm and guard my heart." That's a killer line!
posted by
Troosha
on April 21, 2008 at 8:24 AM
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"I splint my arm and guard my heart." This line jumped off the screen at me. Very nice
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on April 21, 2008 at 5:59 AM
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Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 20, 2008 at 9:08 PM
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join the club of broken hearts
posted by
Lanetay
on April 20, 2008 at 8:57 PM
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I am so proud of you for working so hard on this double nonet. But there is some confusion from my last input. A double nonet is two nonets put together with one nonet being inverted. The syllable count is 9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1-1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9. You will have a total of 18 lines. I hope this helps. If not give me a yell and we will continue to work on it. Take care my friend! Happy writing. sam
posted by
sam444
on April 20, 2008 at 9:52 AM
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Love is very strange, it can come and go, but not the love of Christ.
His is unconditional.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 20, 2008 at 8:48 AM
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Love is such a strange thing......all I can ever think is to Love with all my heart, and know that I did right to the person I am with, AND no regrets!!!
posted by
majesticvisions
on April 20, 2008 at 8:46 AM
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The form of your poetry is a work of art all by itself. As for love...what can I say! I still believe that it's waiting out there somewhere. Perhaps I need new glasses to find it.
posted by
vogue
on April 20, 2008 at 7:53 AM
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Love..
Is the hardest of emotions to deal with..I loved the man who was my daughters' father..Yet life took him..I haven't been able to move on yet...Beautiful verse...Show the ache of love very well.
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 20, 2008 at 7:26 AM
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I hope it does come through for you. Your hurt shines through.
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 20, 2008 at 7:20 AM
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my prayers......but some times to be alone is best.,
posted by
Star5_
on April 20, 2008 at 6:29 AM
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