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Excellent perceivings blended into a work of art!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 20, 2008 at 1:09 PM
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I Loved This!
So well done...It's scarey! Great Job!

posted by
CRShelley
on April 19, 2008 at 5:57 PM
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This is a beautiful allegory --- beautiful story to tell --- narration is perfect!!! and I was enthralled throughout



Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 19, 2008 at 4:20 PM
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Amazing poem :-) I loved the imagery and the story of triumph against adversity. Thanks so much, reading you has given my day a great lift, and G-d knows I needed it!.

posted by
Sinome
on April 19, 2008 at 1:58 PM
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This is superb. I trust your brother is improving after treatment. He is in my prayers. sam
posted by
sam444
on April 19, 2008 at 1:15 PM
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