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Perfect!
This is absolutely 'right' in every way, full of original little touches! "Rented beer... wonderful, lol! And I'm enjoying the 'kick in the gut' this scene produces, as well as the hint of further complications and trouble...you've got me completely hooked...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 18, 2008 at 5:12 AM
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I am reading along! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 17, 2008 at 2:16 PM
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halfelven
very good indeed!!
posted by
Tattered_Knight
on April 17, 2008 at 12:02 PM
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Well written story! A lot of action!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 17, 2008 at 9:20 AM
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Nice.
You have a a nice touch, a great voice for storytelling. I enjoyed reading these items, and look forward to seeing more of them.
posted by
JBCaine
on April 17, 2008 at 9:03 AM
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