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                    kaboom
                
                *sigh*........your dachsund looks just like mine!  
                
                    posted by
                    Tattered_Knight
                     on April 15, 2008 at 4:48 PM
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                    Re: Kaboom
                
                Thanks Nautikos!  I want to know critique as well, I need that too!

  Really , appreciate it!  
                
                    posted by
                    KaBooM62
                     on April 14, 2008 at 8:32 PM
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                    posted by
                    BC-A
                     on April 14, 2008 at 6:50 PM
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                    Kaboom
                
                I have been somewhat guilty myself in that regard, so I decided to go back and read more of your fiction. Tonight I read 'Slow Train, Fast Train', and really enjoyed it. I even left a bit of a critique on one of the sections - I hope you don't mind...

 
  
                
                    posted by
                    Nautikos
                     on April 14, 2008 at 6:17 PM
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                today...teacher got mad at coffee cuz she didn't bring all her textbooks....wth.... oh well!  
                
                    posted by
                    jyankee
                     on April 14, 2008 at 4:20 AM
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                    I understand 
                
                your frustrations, but I've noticed that fiction doesn't draw a huge readership on Blogit. It's a pity because I've read some great stories here over the years that have got almost no clicks.  
                
                    posted by
                    Antipodean
                     on April 13, 2008 at 7:57 PM
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