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Chris ~.~
They are "firsts" -- but, as you can see, you (along with Marion and Charles) were my inspiration. Analyzing and using your Haiku as examples, I was able to create these. Thank you!...they're lots of fun to write. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on April 14, 2008 at 7:56 PM
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I'm surprised you announce these as your first attempt-they are so very
good soulspeaker! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 14, 2008 at 1:33 PM
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vogue ~.~
Thank you for commenting on my "first attempt." I truly appreciate it. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on April 13, 2008 at 2:29 PM
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Purple ~.~
Thank you so much, dear. I appreciate your comments. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on April 13, 2008 at 2:26 PM
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Marion ~.~
Thank you! --and thank you for responding to my request. These are really fun--and I'm sure they will get easier with practice. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on April 13, 2008 at 2:24 PM
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Well done!
I really liked the last two..Keep trying they will become easier to do! OOh and fireflys are my total favorite!
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 13, 2008 at 9:17 AM
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great attempt my dear...and great collections too!!!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 13, 2008 at 4:45 AM
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Really a first attempt? Quite good, particularly the last one. Try more.
posted by
vogue
on April 13, 2008 at 3:58 AM
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