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Re: Thanks for the correction
English is my 2nd language (lame excuse) and I wos nevor goot as spellingt (the real reason)

posted by AardigeAfrikaner on April 13, 2008 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

I loved the rhyming and it flowed very well. I think you mispelled were I think you meant where.

posted by cmhnord on April 13, 2008 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you all for reading and commenting. Much appreciated.

posted by AardigeAfrikaner on April 13, 2008 at 6:35 PM | link to this | reply

powerful words my friend!

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on April 12, 2008 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

posted by CRShelley on April 12, 2008 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

I so concur with Afzal!  sam

posted by sam444 on April 12, 2008 at 7:21 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and Poignant !

posted by afzal50 on April 12, 2008 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply