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Re: Nautikos
Thanks, Krisles! And well, yes...

posted by
Nautikos
on April 17, 2008 at 4:44 AM
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Nautikos
Of course, it's very clever.....perhaps it's the hour, but does this have a bit of a cynical tone to it?.....I love the imagery of ripples and sand.....I hadn't heard the Dada movement referenced in years! What fun! If it weren't so late, I'd try to find something in an old book....but, I mustn't burn up my vacation hours....I'm soooooo enjoying staying up late....just like a little kid!
posted by
Krisles
on April 16, 2008 at 12:15 AM
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Re: "In a dada world"
Thanks, cheugon...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 14, 2008 at 6:29 PM
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Re:
Thanks, Elyse, it means a lot to me that you like it...

posted by
Nautikos
on April 14, 2008 at 6:23 PM
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Re:
Thanks, OTA, I really appreciate that...

posted by
Nautikos
on April 14, 2008 at 6:21 PM
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"In a dada world"
Nice!
posted by
metalrat
on April 13, 2008 at 6:19 PM
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so cool ~ so creative Naut ~ wow

Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 13, 2008 at 6:12 PM
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..and waves in the ocean..
well done Naut! What a wonderful surprise to find all these haiku.
posted by
Blue_feathers
on April 13, 2008 at 12:44 PM
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Re:
Thanks, CRS!
posted by
Nautikos
on April 13, 2008 at 8:32 AM
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Re: Well expressed !
Thanks, afzal!
posted by
Nautikos
on April 13, 2008 at 8:31 AM
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Re:
Thank you, Sinome!

posted by
Nautikos
on April 13, 2008 at 8:31 AM
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Re:
Thanks, sam!

posted by
Nautikos
on April 13, 2008 at 8:30 AM
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Well expressed !
posted by
afzal50
on April 12, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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posted by
CRShelley
on April 12, 2008 at 5:14 PM
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Beautiful :-)
posted by
Sinome
on April 12, 2008 at 3:41 PM
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Exciting haiku! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 12, 2008 at 2:48 PM
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