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I enjoyed this poem and its message!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 12, 2008 at 3:11 PM
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Excellent, loved the AB rhyme scheme. The imagery was very well placed and the ending superb! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 12, 2008 at 10:11 AM
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We all forsake things when certain things happen...
I know this has happened to me...I have forsaken a few important things in my life...because of the one girl in my Reserve unit I'm so infatuated with...so I know exactly what you feel like...
posted by
djtwreckz
on April 11, 2008 at 9:42 PM
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I like your style
and I like what you write,I'll continue to stop by
posted by
Kobriel
on April 11, 2008 at 5:58 PM
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definetly like this style good verse
posted by
jefco
on April 11, 2008 at 4:51 PM
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Well that was quite tame ;)
Great writing! I Loved It!
posted by
CRShelley
on April 11, 2008 at 4:42 PM
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