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Well done
You write very smoothly, and work the dialogue in really well. There's some observations there that are really precise and evocative. But fiction's a hard slog on Blogit, so don't worry about the number of clicks!
posted by
Antipodean
on April 13, 2008 at 8:17 PM
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Before the Ever after:
Good as always. I'm hooked on your stories!
posted by
Oosthuizen
on April 12, 2008 at 4:23 AM
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excelente'
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on April 11, 2008 at 3:06 PM
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I am reading along! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 11, 2008 at 5:27 AM
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good flow -- I'll start at the begining
posted by
jefco
on April 10, 2008 at 9:08 PM
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