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Elyse
Thanks Elyse!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 12, 2008 at 8:22 AM
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Re: Wow-you are so very passionate Soul!! I so readily read this piece of y
Thanks Chris!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 12, 2008 at 8:21 AM
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Re: You really do write from your heart don't you
Thanks Kabu! You're doing fine with Tom. You're weaving internal musings with history and action, in a very realistic way. Make's for fine reading. A short post messes with continuity, but if you do a long post, readers may back off!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 12, 2008 at 8:20 AM
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Re: Very well written, Soul
Thanks Kayzz!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 12, 2008 at 8:17 AM
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Re: Another great post, lifts my spirits to think there is a conscience
Thanks Callista! The suffering have to lift each other up!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 12, 2008 at 8:16 AM
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Re: Dave ~.~
Thanks SS!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 12, 2008 at 8:14 AM
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Re: I enjoyed this soulbuilder
Thanks whirlwind!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 12, 2008 at 8:13 AM
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majesticvisions
The truth of the world that exists now is missed by people who depend on scriptures for their information. Mired in the past, they cannot see the evolution of the world, and the pervasiveness of evil. This observation is often derided and its observers labeled as negative. It is important to see what kind of gravy you're stewing in. The competitors have locked themselves into games, oblivious of the larger issues in life. Morons at play! Thanks!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 12, 2008 at 8:13 AM
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Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 11, 2008 at 9:31 PM
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Wow-you are so very passionate Soul!! I so readily read this piece of your
work and am both-'a little fearfull'-(of what I don't know)-and fascinated! Thank you.Chris.
PS.I believe 'fascinated' is not the correct word-more like-'open minded'?
posted by
Scramble
on April 11, 2008 at 11:01 AM
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You really do write from your heart don't you
I feel pretty humbled that you see what I am trying to say with my Tom story. and identify with him. The world is a harsh place if you're different and an individual. I am wrestling with the terrible degrading racist language that I am using. But Tom was born in 1797 and it's now nearly 1817. This means that to keep it authentic I must let my characters use the language of their time, but I actualy cringe sometimes while I write and I can feel the anger rising. I do feel though that I am meant to write about Tom.
posted by
Kabu
on April 10, 2008 at 2:14 PM
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Very well written, Soul
posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 10, 2008 at 12:44 PM
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Another great post, lifts my spirits to think there is a conscience
speaking here on blogit!!!!
posted by
callista22001
on April 10, 2008 at 10:55 AM
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Dave ~.~
A very passionate, well-thought-out and well-written post. Speak on! Write on! Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on April 10, 2008 at 7:33 AM
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I enjoyed this soulbuilder
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 10, 2008 at 5:55 AM
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"yes, truth of the world that exists now". I posted something similar to these words you wrote. Bottom line for my post today is to hopefully have more meaningful, more uplifiting items in the papers and the news. No more face time for criminals, etc....
posted by
majesticvisions
on April 10, 2008 at 3:32 AM
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