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Ahhh...she's tipsy ~ not in a clear mind --- great start  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 12, 2008 at 9:24 PM | link to this | reply

sounds like the start of a good story to come.

posted by majesticvisions on April 10, 2008 at 4:10 AM | link to this | reply

Good
 "Do another one!"

posted by Kolekshuns on April 9, 2008 at 11:23 PM | link to this | reply

A great set up, I am ready for more!  sam

posted by sam444 on April 9, 2008 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

posted by CRShelley on April 9, 2008 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

hmmnnn interesting plot...i'll see what happens next my dear friend...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on April 9, 2008 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply