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Good poem for an airplane ride!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on April 5, 2008 at 4:34 PM | link to this | reply

This is so fabulous. The concept and the imagery are a stand alone five star poem!  sam

posted by sam444 on April 5, 2008 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

Highly inspiring poem !

posted by afzal50 on April 5, 2008 at 5:48 AM | link to this | reply

I can imagine why a flight inspired you to that lovely poem. I always build the clouds outside the plane windows into castles, hiding great secrets.

posted by vogue on April 5, 2008 at 4:17 AM | link to this | reply