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serendipity ~.~
Thank you very much! I do tend to be a little unconventional at times. --and slow down...believe me, I know the consequences. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on April 7, 2008 at 3:11 PM | link to this | reply

This is so awesome!! Completely original! ....maybe that's why I've been soo tried myself....hhmmm

posted by serendipity09 on April 5, 2008 at 7:57 AM | link to this | reply

Bhaskar ~.~
I think you're right! ~SS

posted by soulspeaker on April 5, 2008 at 12:57 AM | link to this | reply

Bhaskar ~.~
Thank you for your wonderful comments. They have given me renewed energy. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on April 5, 2008 at 12:53 AM | link to this | reply

Hahaha, i think now your tiredness will evaporate

posted by Bhaskar.ing on April 5, 2008 at 12:20 AM | link to this | reply

What an exhilarating, delightful, exquisitely creative poem, and that too in tirednss?!!! Fantastic

posted by Bhaskar.ing on April 5, 2008 at 12:19 AM | link to this | reply

Elyse ~.~
-- LOL  I'm sure many can relate to this piece. ...sometimes I have to laugh at myself to keep my sanity. (Maybe it's not working.) LOL  Thank you for your comment. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on April 4, 2008 at 10:47 PM | link to this | reply

afzal ~.~
Thank you so much! We appreciate your comment. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on April 4, 2008 at 10:41 PM | link to this | reply

   --- oh my, were you eavesdropping near my life?  LOL...this is so good...wow ~ succinct!!!!! Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 4, 2008 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

Creative style of expression ! Well said !

posted by afzal50 on April 4, 2008 at 7:12 PM | link to this | reply

Marion ~.~
Thank you for your comments -- they're much appreciated. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on April 4, 2008 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply

sam ~.~
I'm sure many can relate to this. Thank you for commenting. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on April 4, 2008 at 2:21 PM | link to this | reply

Kayzzaman ~.~
Thank you...and thank you for commenting. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on April 4, 2008 at 2:20 PM | link to this | reply

Kobriel ~.~
So you can relate--sometimes I just have to convince myself that I work too hard (and having been on the debating team in high school, it always turns into a debate (only one of us was on the team, though -- LOL.) Thank you for commenting. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on April 4, 2008 at 2:18 PM | link to this | reply

Good work, well done

posted by Kayzzaman on April 4, 2008 at 1:49 PM | link to this | reply

I relate, I felt I was your subject matter. Have a tremendous weekend and many blessings!  sam

posted by sam444 on April 4, 2008 at 1:42 PM | link to this | reply

(Chills) sounds like me!
Or the two me's I should say. I love the way #2 in unrelenting and cuts through #1's weariness. I can relate so much to this...I love it.

posted by Kobriel on April 4, 2008 at 12:24 PM | link to this | reply

So true!
I love how you had the two minds working in conversation together. Brillant! Hope you have a good weekend too!

posted by Wigopa_ on April 4, 2008 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply