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Hi, what a great way to decribe a low life.....I'm love with your poem
posted by
edytka1974
on April 18, 2008 at 2:55 PM
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some low points in our lives...but you are somebody big enough to have your wonderful share in this world my dear carl...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 7, 2008 at 8:35 PM
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Thanks for your insite on my post! I will have to say that mantra quite a few times a day I'm sure. Very much appreciated!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on April 7, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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You must have been on a real downer when writing this one my friend!
we all have moments like these! Well done and thank you for sharing a very private moment
posted by
mariaki
on April 7, 2008 at 3:46 AM
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Poignant! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 4, 2008 at 7:33 AM
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you managed to put across your feelings and that's good
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 4, 2008 at 4:52 AM
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However, despondency has inspired you to write, yet again, a great poem. Every mood jolts the creativity within us.
posted by
vogue
on April 4, 2008 at 3:04 AM
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heartbreaking feeling
posted by
pelagus
on April 4, 2008 at 2:20 AM
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Oh yes, despondency can put on airs...this is so effective in its sadness and even carries the imagery ~ awwww....(the term loser makes me shiver)
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 3, 2008 at 9:38 PM
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Re: I wasn't then
But I am now better than I was.
posted by
cpklapper
on April 3, 2008 at 9:31 PM
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oh my dear carl, this is heartbreaking....hope you're well my dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 3, 2008 at 9:18 PM
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