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posted by
KaBooM62
on April 7, 2008 at 5:27 PM
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Hiya, Sis!
If this is practice, then you are gonna be truly dangerous when your game is in the form you want it to be. This is very, very nice.
posted by
strat
on April 4, 2008 at 6:14 AM
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A couple of my favorites teaming up.
I like the results. Very nice, Krisles.
Here's to finding a balance.
posted by
CunningLinguist
on April 3, 2008 at 1:22 PM
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Krisles, I think I'll stick to the hail haikus. They take less brain power to read. HAHAHA. Just kidding. I always like to try reading poetry out loud to see how it sounds. I had a little trouble getting "Desire" satisfactorily read out loud.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 2, 2008 at 8:03 PM
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I must say I read this twice and used two different cadences. The imagery is so great. The wording pulls me through like a fine tooth comb. I just can't say enough. So I must run, I have to read this again. You are moving along splendidly. sam
posted by
sam444
on April 2, 2008 at 7:47 PM
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Nice!
"and the silent heart could shout!" Love it!
posted by
CRShelley
on April 2, 2008 at 6:54 PM
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