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                    very well said
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    star4sky5
                     on April 3, 2008 at 10:59 AM
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                Striking imagery!  sam  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on April 2, 2008 at 2:41 PM
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                    This is good!
                
                Makes me long for summertime! Good Job!  
                
                    posted by
                    CRShelley
                     on April 2, 2008 at 1:36 PM
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                    extrordinarily sad...
                
                you capture the moment of loss, and never lose sight of the fact that you're in a poem.  
 
  
                
                    posted by
                    FineYoungSinger
                     on April 2, 2008 at 9:06 AM
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