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Great read this is what I mean by morals, sometimes our morals close out
feelings that overcome us yet we have to be strong and say no.
posted by
Mystereo
on September 30, 2010 at 7:36 AM
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Thank you ELyse, so much
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:24 PM
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Thank you Dave. :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:23 PM
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Re: the conflict in this piece is type that captures a person, wow
Thank you Writespirit, glad you enjoyed it
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:21 PM
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Re: Sinome
Always the exquisite poet :-) thank you Bhaskar.ing
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:20 PM
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Re: Love..
Thank you Marion :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:19 PM
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Re: oh wow...
Thank you so much
Tyleness :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:18 PM
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Just get better love, I have missed you too. Thank you
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:16 PM
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Re: My dear sinome, I can't tell how much this has touched my soul
I am glad you enjoyed it Maria,
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:15 PM
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Re: This is Beautifully written Sinome! Sad and 'moving' but Beautifull! I'm
I know Chris, I know I can not run away, but I can dream, can't I :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:14 PM
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Thank you Sam, you are sweet :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:13 PM
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Re: wow that was a tremendous piece
Thanks q quietguy Appreciate it.
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:12 PM
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Re: I agree with Elyse...
Thank you Charles, that is kind of you, and btw, saw your pic, hmmmmmm Mel has nothing on you :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:11 PM
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Re: Passionate and powerful !
Thanks Afzal,
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:10 PM
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Re: Yes, Bridges of Madison County ...
Wow :-) Thanks Vickip,
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:09 PM
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Re: Don't run away any where, call me I find you a place for you......
I will call you Sue, if I decide to run, but I think I got to stay put for now Thanks :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:07 PM
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Re: that's what I have told Wiely I would run away with you
Awwwwww Kabu, you are so sweet :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:06 PM
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Re: Awesome! I have no words.
Thanks Whacky, :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:05 PM
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Re: Excellent illustration, Sinome...well-done!
Appreciate it Teddy, :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:05 PM
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Re: Sinome ~.~
Thank you Soul Speaker
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:04 PM
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Re: Sinome
Very true Troosha, Thanks
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 11:03 PM
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Sinome
An extremely touching piece.
Sometimes we have to remind ourselves that the grass isn't necessarily greener on the other side.
posted by
Troosha
on March 28, 2008 at 2:23 PM
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Sinome ~.~
Beautifully written --with a tinge of joy... and sorrow. Thank you for sharing.Peace and blessings.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 28, 2008 at 8:23 AM
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Excellent illustration, Sinome...well-done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 28, 2008 at 7:26 AM
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Awesome! I have no words.
=^. .^= Bo is
smiling about something.
I am too! A rose
from me!
posted by
Whacky
on March 27, 2008 at 10:06 PM
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that's what I have told Wiely I would run away with you
this is wonderful passionate writing
posted by
Kabu
on March 27, 2008 at 9:27 PM
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Don't run away any where, call me I find you a place for you......
posted by
Star5_
on March 27, 2008 at 8:19 PM
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Yes, Bridges of Madison County ...
....
Cheers to your integrity, but you also have to remember if you are miserable, your partner/husband/wife probably is too. Good luck
posted by
VictoriaP
on March 27, 2008 at 8:06 PM
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Passionate and powerful !
posted by
afzal50
on March 27, 2008 at 6:51 PM
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I agree with Elyse...
...it's reminiscent of
Bridges of Madison County. Such a predicament is not uncommon. I've been there myself. Your integrity is as big as your heart. Stunning poem, Sinome! Personally, I consider it one of your best....and that's saying alot!
posted by
metalrat
on March 27, 2008 at 5:10 PM
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wow that was a tremendous piece
posted by
quietguy7
on March 27, 2008 at 3:04 PM
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Excellent concept and delivered in grand imagery! s am
posted by
sam444
on March 27, 2008 at 12:36 PM
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This is Beautifully written Sinome! Sad and 'moving' but Beautifull! I'm
sure that you know that we cannot 'run away'---we would forever be 'looking over our shoulders' so to speak! God bless.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 27, 2008 at 7:49 AM
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My dear sinome, I can't tell how much this has touched my soul
it's as if you saw into it and directed this especially to me! Thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on March 27, 2008 at 6:44 AM
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my ever touching sinome....i have missed you my love....and your touching pieces...i'm taking things slow my love...thank you for wishing me well dear....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 27, 2008 at 3:29 AM
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oh wow...
Loved it!!!
posted by
tyleness
on March 26, 2008 at 11:27 PM
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Love..
such a fragile thing that can happen and tear us apart. Beautiful write! So very well spoken..to be felt in the reader's heart!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 26, 2008 at 10:36 PM
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Sinome
The Sinome touch in a beauty of a poetry that is now looking forward, by saying Bye to the old one. RENEWED? ....
If winter comes, Can spring be far behind? 
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 26, 2008 at 10:31 PM
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the conflict in this piece is type that captures a person, wow
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on March 26, 2008 at 10:17 PM
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Seems a decision made! Not for the highest but for the possible!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 26, 2008 at 10:08 PM
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Oh this captures my heart, --- and has the romance of that like Bridges of Madison County...this is very touching...very.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 26, 2008 at 9:56 PM
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