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Upon wings?...
Your poem brings to mind that some things are inevitable no matter how we strive. Maybe the key is not to strive, but to just trust in the One who has made us. If we have shipwrecked along the way, it is because we have tried to be the commander. If anything "vanishes into the blue", it should be upon wings and in that, it soars and comes back to us. Vivi.
posted by
groovy_poetess
on March 28, 2008 at 1:07 PM
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Oneness
Scary yet beautiful
posted by
Kobriel
on March 27, 2008 at 8:25 PM
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I adore the poignant imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 27, 2008 at 12:32 PM
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"and then all will vanish into the blue"----That's just Lovely Kayzzaman! C
posted by
Scramble
on March 27, 2008 at 7:45 AM
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Interesting concept of death and re-birth..........
fading into blue feels so good; thank you
posted by
mariaki
on March 27, 2008 at 6:41 AM
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And return to the dust and turn brown?
posted by
Straightforward
on March 27, 2008 at 4:45 AM
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yes dear...vanishing into the blue indeed....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 27, 2008 at 4:37 AM
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pretty thoughts, lovely words to describe this feeling 
posted by
pelagus
on March 27, 2008 at 1:44 AM
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Very nice, Kayzzaman. Vanishing into the blue is such a pleasant thought.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 27, 2008 at 12:15 AM
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Ah this reminds me of life and death --- of birth and growth and then diminishing in age. This is very poignant...Your poetry is so deep, I admire - and take it with me for reflection.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 26, 2008 at 9:58 PM
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Lovely! Maybe truth!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 26, 2008 at 9:57 PM
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