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Hey, Naut, I thought about putting spaces to make it more Haiku-
friendly, but decided that most people would get it either way and went for the streaming expletive version...
posted by
saul_relative
on April 1, 2008 at 7:50 AM
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Thanks, FYS. It was nothing. Really...
posted by
saul_relative
on April 1, 2008 at 7:05 AM
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I think this piece shows real promise.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on March 31, 2008 at 10:57 AM
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That's excellent, Saul!
You just haven't got the syllable pattern quite right yet - remember, it's 5-7-5...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 30, 2008 at 5:46 AM
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Thanks, katray...
posted by
saul_relative
on March 29, 2008 at 9:20 AM
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Lol Saul, Good One!
You've outdone yourself, I do believe..:)..
posted by
Katray2
on March 28, 2008 at 7:49 AM
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That's nothing, Whacky, You should hear me during a game where the
Dallas Cowboys are losing badly...
posted by
saul_relative
on March 28, 2008 at 6:10 AM
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Sam: that would be in the Beetle Bailey lexicon, I do believe...
posted by
saul_relative
on March 28, 2008 at 6:07 AM
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Oh, I definitely get that, Azur...
posted by
saul_relative
on March 28, 2008 at 6:06 AM
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It's like telemarketer rage, TAPS...
posted by
saul_relative
on March 28, 2008 at 6:05 AM
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LOL! That's really something!
=^. .^= Bo is
smiling about something.
I am too! A rose
from me!
posted by
Whacky
on March 27, 2008 at 8:38 PM
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I would love to read the translation. just kidding. sam
posted by
sam444
on March 27, 2008 at 9:48 AM
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Saul
You are married aren't you? That kind of anger ;-)
posted by
Azur
on March 27, 2008 at 12:45 AM
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Saul_relative, I can't quite make out the details, but I definitely get the feel.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 26, 2008 at 11:59 PM
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Are you alright? Is everything okay? What are you so angry about?
posted by
saul_relative
on March 26, 2008 at 11:43 PM
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Saul, the way I am now
I need a shelf full of books to fill. I am angry beyond anything I have felt probably ever
posted by
Azur
on March 26, 2008 at 11:37 PM
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Write two, Azur. Or a sonnet. Or a bawdy, expletive filled limerick.
posted by
saul_relative
on March 26, 2008 at 11:14 PM
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that's funny Saul Relative
I would need more than a haiku to express my exasperation right now.
posted by
Azur
on March 26, 2008 at 11:07 PM
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