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A Poem you have to really listen to
It's words are so poignant you have to get close to hear all the unwrittens. I really enjoyed it. I'm no contemplater of love though, I'm afraid I have yet to experience it
posted by
Kobriel
on March 27, 2008 at 8:23 PM
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Very well written!
posted by
tyleness
on March 26, 2008 at 11:35 PM
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strong indeed
posted by
Samantha39
on March 26, 2008 at 5:19 PM
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Very good
Thanks for sharing
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on March 26, 2008 at 2:45 PM
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Very strong piece of writing-and-thought provoking! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 26, 2008 at 1:48 PM
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Pretty powerful and alludes to possession ~ The inference of 'serendipity' is creative and clever. This poem leaves me
- pondering - very poignant ~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 26, 2008 at 12:45 PM
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This is incredible. I hope it hapens for you my friend! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 26, 2008 at 12:23 PM
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That poem pisses me off
Very well written! Precisely what she tried to do, had I not opened my eyes I would have been alone AND broke. Now, I'm just alone. funny I stumbled onto this write!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on March 26, 2008 at 12:14 PM
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very strong words
posted by
quietguy7
on March 26, 2008 at 12:12 PM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 26, 2008 at 11:35 AM
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wOaw! Amazing ode to slavery! Very well put!
posted by
pelagus
on March 26, 2008 at 9:41 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on March 26, 2008 at 9:20 AM
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Nice poem ! Well written !
posted by
afzal50
on March 26, 2008 at 9:18 AM
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