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awesome contrast that concludes beautifully
posted by
BC-A
on March 27, 2008 at 6:41 PM
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I don't understand poetry either and like you mine are random thoughts and feelings than actually trying to make a poem. Sometimes when I write poems I'm simply too upset to complete the sentence or too afraid to finish them.. Don't know sometimes which it is. I enjoyed this writing.
posted by
SomeoneElse
on March 27, 2008 at 12:57 PM
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Very good, I liked the opposites and the message, Great poem.
posted by
Sinome
on March 26, 2008 at 10:10 PM
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Re:
thanks... i consider that a big compliment coming from you =)
posted by
philibuster14
on March 26, 2008 at 3:16 PM
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Excellent imagery and transition! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 26, 2008 at 8:49 AM
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