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Awsome seeing through the lies, love your tragic sense of humour, wishing
you new possibilities, imagine them and take them..remember the adventure..
posted by
wordjewels
on April 2, 2008 at 6:07 AM
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You're up and rolling bro! Lovely work! Eff the OSTRICHES!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 26, 2008 at 11:15 AM
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*nods*
Well we shouldn't feel so helpless - maybe just somehow ALL of us could make a difference - I don't know - here have a banana
oh oops that is my phone
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on March 26, 2008 at 8:34 AM
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Great poem indeed !
posted by
afzal50
on March 25, 2008 at 7:05 PM
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what a beautiful poem.
posted by
ZenMom
on March 25, 2008 at 6:54 PM
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Yeah, here is where we parted ways:
"if you had to spend the time it takes to put on your makeup
to research what is really goin' on...
in a country that is becoming less and less "free"
would ya do it?"
How about, "if you had to spend the time it takes for your viagra to kick in ....."?? Sorry if I missed your point - just couldn't get past those lines.
posted by
VictoriaP
on March 25, 2008 at 6:49 PM
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