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cool....well written
posted by
jefco
on March 26, 2008 at 12:24 PM
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Tremendously visual
Most excellent writing - enormously vivid in the visual beauty the reader experiences.
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on March 26, 2008 at 7:42 AM
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Beautiful Time capsule..
I found that I could almost feel the wind and smell the cherry blossoms on the air...Great picture/imagery..
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 25, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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Very original stuff! Nice snapshot of a time gone by!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 25, 2008 at 9:20 AM
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reminds me of Memoirs of a Geisha.
(the movie didn't do the book justice)
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on March 25, 2008 at 8:18 AM
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Blue
You wrote this poem so well it made me feel as though I were actually there
I've read the last two of your fourteen pages..will be back to read the rest
I've enjoyed your poems and I know my granddaughter Akira (Autumn Jade) would love them
thank you..ttyl..have a fun day
posted by
CrossRhoads
on March 25, 2008 at 7:23 AM
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