Go to tha dark
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- Go to mind darkness
very real -- very well done
posted by
jefco
on March 24, 2008 at 1:52 PM
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Great poem, the imagery and the deep questioning were the poem's assets! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 24, 2008 at 6:59 AM
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Great job, just my style. For the voices are in the wind. Keep it up my friend. olhip
posted by
olhip50
on March 24, 2008 at 4:19 AM
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I have seen the dark you write about ....
for me it took a conscious effort to pull myself back into the light. I love this - thank you!
posted by
VictoriaP
on March 24, 2008 at 2:16 AM
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shonnieboy ~.~
I really enjoyed this read -- so very well expressed and wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 24, 2008 at 2:13 AM
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Most certainly a lot going on there
There are some really complex images in these poem. It really made me think.
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on March 23, 2008 at 8:06 PM
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