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Very nicely done, some good imagery.
posted by
DoubtfulSpirit
on March 28, 2008 at 8:56 PM
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BRRRR!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on March 25, 2008 at 3:30 PM
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cold waters
that dared the montery waves... you definitely conveyed a sense of frigid waters.
posted by
bluebossa
on March 25, 2008 at 1:45 AM
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Oh bur
I like my hot showers - but I do remember a dip in a cold lake many years ago
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on March 23, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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my kids would have loved that too dear carl! lovely piece dear! Happy easter to you and your family my dear....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 23, 2008 at 6:32 PM
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cpklapper
It's amazing the cold waters we'll brave when we're young... not now though (not this girl).
posted by
Troosha
on March 23, 2008 at 12:47 PM
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Wonderful, I loved it
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 23, 2008 at 12:20 PM
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Re:
Glad you enjoyed it. I was amazed that my kids could stand the freezing water until I remembered that I used to swim in the brooks of Northern Westchester County in New York State and they never got warm, in part because of all the shade from the trees.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on March 23, 2008 at 11:11 AM
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Oh how precious this is...I recall the cold ocean waves from yes, the bay of Fundy and along the eastern shoreline --- Bar Harbour - brrr...lived in Maine a while -
I recall (i'm from Texas) that I was going to jump in my first summer up there - and when my toes hit that first wave - OUCH - I mean the blue color of my toes was the key - Sorry it's too cold just yet to jump in ~ Elyse --- this all came from reading your wonderful poem here - thank you for memories ~
posted by
elysianfields
on March 23, 2008 at 11:00 AM
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