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Re: kmer
thank you, bhaskar.ing! I think your imagery is the next step!
posted by
kmer
on March 23, 2008 at 2:39 PM
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Re: I agree with Elyse and Sam
thank you, wigopa!
posted by
kmer
on March 23, 2008 at 2:38 PM
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thanks, elyse! I do like the pattern in this one!
posted by
kmer
on March 23, 2008 at 2:37 PM
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kmer
Clean, Simple, Beautiful. The cleansing effect on the earth due to falling raindrop's nectar.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 22, 2008 at 11:31 PM
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I agree with Elyse and Sam
I find this very intoxicating...Gets my wheels going...very nice indeed..
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 22, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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like rain drops, repetition, softly, repeatedly...flowing into such a nice pattern here...I like your style ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 22, 2008 at 6:23 PM
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Re: mind turning
I'm pretty sure that's the way I felt when I wrote this!
posted by
kmer
on March 22, 2008 at 5:01 PM
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I like this, you have my mind turning and that is grand! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 22, 2008 at 3:08 PM
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