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Well olhip that was a really awesome. All of us move in and out of silly messes,scenarios, and even silly sorrows. I'm weaving through my own and I found your poem very touching thanks.
posted by
Kobriel
on March 23, 2008 at 10:15 AM
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This is very touching and you know, I know many can relate ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 22, 2008 at 7:54 PM
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Send the right one to me. READ MY BLOG
posted by
Star5_
on March 22, 2008 at 7:07 PM
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Its like a dead end that can't be breached! The warrior plods on!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 22, 2008 at 3:13 PM
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What beautiful writring! Tomorrow always offers and escape for yesterday....and the oppurtunity to make things better if we wish. Nice work
posted by
serendipity09
on March 22, 2008 at 2:09 PM
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very well written piece and a very heartfelt spoken sentiments!!! this is so touching dear olhip...i felt every line cutting thru my heart, my dear the game of life no matter how 'silly or cruel' must be dealt with head on...it's not just a game, it's our lives revolving around it. We play the game we don't it play us...keep playing dear one...it's the only way we can win it...you walk away from it, you loose long before it begun...a light at the end of every tunnel is what i always say dear...been there...still going thru...in my heart i know...there'll be light...(thank you dear one for visiting my blog, please come back anytime...)blessed easter to you dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 21, 2008 at 5:17 PM
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I love your writing and I look forward to reading more.
Very insightful
posted by
VictoriaP
on March 21, 2008 at 12:31 PM
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