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Noone wins the race!

This pace that most fall into is actually destructive, it's not realized to what extent until it's too late......hmmmmmmmmmm. My Aunt Dorothy always told me that moderation is the key to longevity...... and variety is the spice of life. I say " Happiness comes from within, it exudes from those that live life as it is a gift and takes the time to revel in the pure beauty of our existence."

A very thought provoking piece.

Peace, Daisy

 

 

posted by Daisy92959 on March 21, 2008 at 7:29 AM | link to this | reply

Wow, this is chock full of poignant, powerful words of wisdom...Great writing Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 20, 2008 at 6:57 PM | link to this | reply

very wonderful

posted by Katherine_Ann on March 20, 2008 at 4:28 PM | link to this | reply

You don't need the next piece...
...the way it ends is perfect! One of the things I've made as a goal in my life, is to live so, that, when I get to the end of my life, I don't have regrets. You're poem resonates with me on that level. Great job!

posted by metalrat on March 20, 2008 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

Olhip, you have a lot of interesting poems posted for the short amount of time you have been here.  I went back to the first one and read it and several on the way back to this one.  It sounds as if perhaps you have been around the block a couple of times.  Good work. 

posted by TAPS. on March 20, 2008 at 3:36 PM | link to this | reply

posted by LongoGeremia on March 20, 2008 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

How very true! And-very well written!Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 20, 2008 at 1:26 PM | link to this | reply

Grand imagery! I like your style too!  sam

posted by sam444 on March 20, 2008 at 12:50 PM | link to this | reply

makes one wonder what the heck we're chasing, doesn't it?
loved it.

posted by FineYoungSinger on March 20, 2008 at 12:24 PM | link to this | reply

this spoke to me on so many different levels

posted by Samantha39 on March 20, 2008 at 12:12 PM | link to this | reply

Well said! And, the life goes on!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 20, 2008 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply