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Excellent - I enjoyed the read
Very nice your words took me there.

posted by Rhisiart_Inside_Out on March 22, 2008 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent, Jack. Provocative...

posted by saul_relative on March 21, 2008 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful verses

posted by Star5_ on March 21, 2008 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written! You obviously have talent!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 20, 2008 at 11:17 AM | link to this | reply

Great poem and astounding imagery!  sam

posted by sam444 on March 20, 2008 at 10:28 AM | link to this | reply

Wow!
He told it so beautifully that I 
Felt his pain. 
 
You have told it well your self. You pulled me into the moment. I could almost hear the man speak. Well done!

posted by Wigopa_ on March 19, 2008 at 11:29 PM | link to this | reply