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An absolute truth here........
so many people around us with so many feelings locked away, perhaps this is why a smile or swift greeting brings such a satisfying response! Thank you
posted by
mariaki
on March 20, 2008 at 1:50 AM
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Wow, so sad and so powerful, how many strangers do we meet every day out there, : locked within their own silence as you say, Very beautiful and poignant poem.
posted by
Sinome
on March 19, 2008 at 10:14 PM
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Another Welcome! :-)
Nice write! very well structured poem leading to a great finish.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 19, 2008 at 10:14 PM
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Welcome To Blogit
This pecce is set up nicely to lead you to a powerful ending, Excellent work!
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on March 19, 2008 at 9:57 PM
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Very well related!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 19, 2008 at 9:55 PM
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