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Your poetry
Your poetry is, in my opinion, the best I've read in my short life on Blogit.
posted by
JennicaM
on March 19, 2008 at 9:46 PM
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rock on
posted by
Samantha39
on March 17, 2008 at 8:20 PM
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This is rather sad ~ no one does well with a broken heart or unrequited love --- this is very powerful in its delivery ~ Poe'ish and well, you did well Poet ~ describing yes, Love it aint always fun, when we run up on the pain ~
Elyse
*thank you for visiting my blog ~ I'm honored
posted by
elysianfields
on March 17, 2008 at 7:38 PM
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really cool. I don't know if you like rock or Bob Dylan, but your style's the best of good rock lyric imagery and emotion.
posted by
BC-A
on March 17, 2008 at 7:01 PM
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Highly passionate !
posted by
afzal50
on March 17, 2008 at 6:06 PM
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