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That was quite a poem so full of pathos. But, somehow I don't know why, I feel it can't be you because you've just come back from glorious sunny days.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 17, 2008 at 9:19 PM
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Such a true deffinition of the risk of love. olhip
posted by
olhip50
on March 17, 2008 at 7:47 PM
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you hit me right to the core my beloved mariaki....
So now I stand in the ruins of love
In the ring of fire; a scorched glove
Flames below me flames above
Trapped in a waterless cove
Thank you my love...Happy St. Pat's day to you love!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 17, 2008 at 7:04 PM
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So sad mariaki but Beautifully written! Wiser after the event! Have a good
week! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 17, 2008 at 2:34 PM
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Its sunny here, but cold! Great poem..... lots of girls probably ask the same questions!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 17, 2008 at 11:16 AM
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So incredibly poignant and how many have neglect to ask the very question you pose. I didn't and I wish I would have! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 17, 2008 at 9:59 AM
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Soo expressive & touching Maria, dear friend on the sunny shore ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 17, 2008 at 9:49 AM
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Dear Maria, this is lovely, well done!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 17, 2008 at 9:34 AM
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posted by
lestate7
on March 17, 2008 at 8:31 AM
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mariaki ~.~
...tugs at the heart strings -- deeply moving. Thank you for sharing. Have a great week.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 17, 2008 at 8:19 AM
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always.......
posted by
Star5_
on March 17, 2008 at 7:51 AM
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beautiful and heart rending
thank you
posted by
lionreign
on March 17, 2008 at 7:33 AM
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