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posted by
Star5_
on March 17, 2008 at 9:39 PM
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I really like the. . .
full-circle format of this poem's structure, your rich imagery and the use of barefootman as a single word.
posted by
stbond
on March 17, 2008 at 8:51 PM
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simply amazing my dear Kayz....amazing!!!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 17, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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excellent wonderful work
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on March 17, 2008 at 4:49 PM
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Oh Wow-Kayzzaman---absolutely Brilliant! I felt that I was there!! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 17, 2008 at 2:21 PM
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A Somnumbulist's Daydream
I felt as if I were walking on fire and glass and got neither burned nor cut. Great work.
joab
posted by
joab1
on March 17, 2008 at 1:36 PM
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Reminds me of the Chinese film...Drunken Master!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 17, 2008 at 11:46 AM
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Kayzz, my dear, this is spectular. I was taken in by the imagery and happily lost. So very well written. You are shinning!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 17, 2008 at 8:58 AM
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Your poetry always gives me pause. Intriguing. Well done, Kayzzaman...
posted by
saul_relative
on March 17, 2008 at 7:47 AM
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grrrrrreat writing
Very good poem, there's a lot of meat to it, it was a great read.
posted by
Jack_Shackleton
on March 17, 2008 at 6:44 AM
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