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                    What a lovely image you just brought to mind!
                
                very well done, thank you
  
                
                    posted by
                    mariaki
                     on March 17, 2008 at 8:21 AM
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                    Well said !
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    afzal50
                     on March 16, 2008 at 7:25 PM
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                oh to be a child again with pure creativity!  nicely captured moment.  thank you.  
                
                    posted by
                    bluebossa
                     on March 16, 2008 at 6:14 AM
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                    posted by
                    Star5_
                     on March 15, 2008 at 7:55 PM
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                    Re: this is heart warming
                
                Thank you, , for your nice comment.  
                
                    posted by
                    cpklapper
                     on March 15, 2008 at 5:57 PM
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                Beautiful poem and beautiful picture you painted for us dear poet, it is heart warming in this day and age of cynicism and coldness to find someone so into his family.  Those li'l ones are lucky to have a daddy like you :-)

 Thank you for sharing this with us :-)  
                
                    posted by
                    Sinome
                     on March 15, 2008 at 5:42 PM
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 glare of the sun...you are something dear Carl...admirable...

  
                
                    posted by
                    __Purple_Mermaid11__
                     on March 15, 2008 at 8:40 AM
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                    This is a nice image...
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    saul_relative
                     on March 15, 2008 at 12:45 AM
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                    this is heart warming
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    Thomas_Cornish
                     on March 14, 2008 at 8:26 PM
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                Thank you, Elyse.  I can still see their faces, so focussed on their creation in the glare of the sun, and the smocks so fully covering them.  
Carl Peter
    
                
                    posted by
                    cpklapper
                     on March 14, 2008 at 8:03 PM
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                    Re: nice look backs
                
                Thank you, Samantha.  They were special times.  
                
                    posted by
                    cpklapper
                     on March 14, 2008 at 8:00 PM
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                awwww...this is too comforting, precious ~ 

Elyse  
                
                    posted by
                    elysianfields
                     on March 14, 2008 at 6:16 PM
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                nice look backs
  
                
                    posted by
                    Samantha39
                     on March 14, 2008 at 3:41 PM
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