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This is laced with some deep sadness. As if the voice wants to admit - not feel guilty but, is stifled by uncertainty or even unacceptance? yielding at the end to a meld of, union of soul and spirit and ...WOw, this one sends me to ponder. Good poem.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 15, 2008 at 2:56 PM
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Very interesting style and content!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 14, 2008 at 10:45 AM
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Very beautifuly written!!!!
Loved it.....Very heartfelt... very deep!
posted by
tyleness
on March 14, 2008 at 9:49 AM
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You nailed it. It's a very dark poem that plays on emotion.
posted by
krjeffrey928
on March 14, 2008 at 8:34 AM
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I couldn't quite get a handle on this one, but if displaying characteristics of both sexes creates a rage, then is imbued to be taken as saturated? I keep trying to fit imbue as to inspire with feelings, but I can't get a mental on it. sam
posted by
sam444
on March 14, 2008 at 7:08 AM
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