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sam ~
Thank you very much. Peace and blessings.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 13, 2008 at 2:46 PM
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FineYoungSinger ~.
Thank you for visiting and commenting. Peace and blessings.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 13, 2008 at 2:43 PM
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quietguy ~
I've found, in my writing, that visuals are very effective in expressing emotion --this poem would not have been as effective without them. Thank you for commenting.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 13, 2008 at 2:40 PM
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Dave ~
Thank you -- thought I'd try something a little different...~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 13, 2008 at 2:30 PM
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mariaki ~
Thank you! Yes--it must be. "...blacker than a thousand midnights."~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 13, 2008 at 2:28 PM
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Elyse ~
Thank you! I really appreciate your comments.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 13, 2008 at 2:23 PM
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Ash ~
Thank you for your comment and concern. Please see my entry: To Those Who Commented on "Losing... My...Self."~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 13, 2008 at 2:15 PM
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joab ~
Thank you for your comment and concern. Please see my entry: To Those Who Commented on "Losing... My...Self."~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 13, 2008 at 2:14 PM
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Comment on Losing... My...Self
You are becoming selfless. Never a fun thing. To see what has been ignored for so long is most painful. Yet necessary for growth. Assuming you are serious; for the
self is NO PLAYTHING.
joab
posted by
joab1
on March 13, 2008 at 1:05 PM
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SS, if this your soul speaking...
better get out & get some sunshine, take a walk..well-expressed ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 13, 2008 at 12:35 PM
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Poignant and powerful. The layout is striking and enhances the meaning so very well. sam
posted by
sam444
on March 13, 2008 at 12:31 PM
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been there many times.....
well expressed!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on March 13, 2008 at 12:19 PM
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those times are never good
however very creative way of writing about it esp the disappearing effect
posted by
quietguy7
on March 13, 2008 at 11:16 AM
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I like the diminishing word-cascade used to emphasize your point! Very Original!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 13, 2008 at 9:27 AM
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What a terrible place to be............
thank goodness for the light creeping through gaps of darkness.......... this is very well done my friend; thank you
posted by
mariaki
on March 13, 2008 at 8:19 AM
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Very good poem...shows the decline, the fall into a muted quietness of a soul. Agony - pain, can do this. Very moving, touched me
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 13, 2008 at 6:58 AM
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