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Lovely!
posted by
Angesom_AG
on March 13, 2008 at 7:41 AM
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Lovely...
...and evocative. Reminiscent of a line from the movie, The Crow..."Mother is the name of God for children..."
posted by
metalrat
on March 12, 2008 at 8:39 PM
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Very cool work...excellent illustration!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 12, 2008 at 3:54 PM
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I love this structure of poem...
repeating a static form is one of the best methods of conveying fluidity of thought and unity of concept. Excellent poem!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on March 12, 2008 at 12:43 PM
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simple powm
posted by
Straightforward
on March 12, 2008 at 11:31 AM
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Poignant poem. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt poem.
Ger
posted by
ger_musser
on March 12, 2008 at 8:43 AM
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I am truly inspired
posted by
Samantha39
on March 11, 2008 at 4:05 PM
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Motherly sentiments and of course very true ones, it just sent me soaring. Beautiful work. Kudos!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 11, 2008 at 10:31 AM
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This is beautiful, bluehands. It should be made into a lovely Mother's Day Card.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 11, 2008 at 7:11 AM
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A very refreshing poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 11, 2008 at 6:30 AM
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beautiful is all i can say
posted by
quietguy7
on March 11, 2008 at 4:34 AM
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One word comes to my mind......LOVELY...... very nice.
Speaking of music. I saw another GREAT (and touching) movie last night called August Rush. If you like a happy ending, and you like to see children who are just amazingly talented. You will love it. I am posting a brief review right now.
posted by
majesticvisions
on March 11, 2008 at 4:25 AM
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Like leaves falling gently. Harpo47
posted by
Harpo47
on March 11, 2008 at 1:46 AM
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bluehands ~
This is beautiful! --I interpret this as the influences of nature (Mother). Very well-written. Thank you for sharing. 
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 11, 2008 at 1:19 AM
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lovely and touching song dear bluehands!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 10, 2008 at 10:57 PM
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