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Re: ger_musser
I am hoping that the work I have continued to do well help with the impressionistic way I try to write so that the mood I was in when I wrote it comes through in the words. Thank you for the awesome comment and for stopping by.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 12, 2008 at 2:51 PM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you for the great comments and for stopping by.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 12, 2008 at 2:49 PM
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I feel this poem is the beginning of expressiveness by the poet. Nice job creating mood. Thanks for sharing.
Ger
posted by
ger_musser
on March 12, 2008 at 8:01 AM
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A very unique poem, so tantalizingly beautiful and yet, full of meaning. Loved it
posted by
Sinome
on March 11, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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Re: Bhaskar.ing
Thank you for the kind words and thanks so much for stopping by.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 11, 2008 at 8:30 PM
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wigopa
There is something hautingly beautiful about your poems, sometimes enigmatic, but very evocative at the same time.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 11, 2008 at 8:19 PM
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Re: Soul_Bulider101
Thanks so much for the great comment and for stopping by.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 11, 2008 at 8:09 PM
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Re: Elyse
I was wondering how to cause a sense of paranoia into ones feelings without all out being terrified. I think I got it across well since you could tell I was feeling safe at the same time. Thankyou so much for stopping by
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Wigopa_
on March 11, 2008 at 8:08 PM
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Re: ash_pradhan
Thank you for the kind comments. I will try to "go with my heart" more and thank you for stopping by
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Wigopa_
on March 11, 2008 at 8:01 PM
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Re: Sam444
Thank you sam! U R awesome!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 11, 2008 at 7:56 PM
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Re: Kayzzaman
Thank you for the great comment and for stopping by
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 11, 2008 at 7:55 PM
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Lovely! I enjoyed this !
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 11, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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What? This is so evocative Poet ~ leaves me pondering who? what? and I feel you feel safe ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 11, 2008 at 3:39 PM
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Very nicely worded & meaningful...
let it flow, sweetie, don't worry too much about whether people will like it or not..go with your heart, we already sense there is lot more waiting there to come out ! - bless, Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 11, 2008 at 11:15 AM
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Right on! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 11, 2008 at 5:58 AM
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Cleverly written, Marion
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 10, 2008 at 11:26 PM
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Re: wigopa ~
I didn't know how the end was going to be until the last line. I wondered then and still wonder should I leave it like this? Thank you for the great comment and for stopping by.
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Wigopa_
on March 10, 2008 at 10:39 PM
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Re: Hmmmm very intriguing
Rhisiart_Inside_Out yes, "it " has shed it's mortal sheel and is out and about. Thank you for the intrguing comment and for stopping by!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 10, 2008 at 10:36 PM
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wigopa ~
Mysteriously intriguing. --I fully expected revelation at the end. Nicely written.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 10, 2008 at 10:36 PM
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Hmmmm very intriguing
It has since shed its mortal coil no doubt.
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on March 10, 2008 at 9:36 PM
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