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Awesome!!
I loved this piece!!!
posted by
tyleness
on March 10, 2008 at 8:23 AM
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I'm in awe...speechless - this is so poignant, and so descriptive - each word, line - draws images and touches this readers this heart ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 10, 2008 at 5:06 AM
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very thought provoking
posted by
quietguy7
on March 10, 2008 at 2:33 AM
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Kayzzaman ~
Breathtakingly beautiful. The flow of the words is serenely comforting. Thank you for sharin.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 10, 2008 at 12:24 AM
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Kayzzaman, I like reading poetry in the middle of the night, when surroundings are quiet and no interruptions from phone or knock on door, when there is no need to hurry.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 9, 2008 at 11:57 PM
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A very insightful poem that left me thinking of life's question once again. Thank you for sharing
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 9, 2008 at 11:38 PM
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Thought provoking poem, as all your poems are dear, you have a way with words that make the soul wonder
Thank you :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 9, 2008 at 10:07 PM
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gooder than good
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on March 9, 2008 at 9:54 PM
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beautiful words my dear kayzzaman....
poignant!
As if the mortal nature is dying for a moment's sojourn.
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 9, 2008 at 9:47 PM
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