Go to a suicidal broken hearted........
- Add a comment
- Go to touching tears T_T
I loved the rhyme scheme. Building the imagery around the tear was brilliant! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 8, 2008 at 4:38 PM
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Endeavor to persevere...
...and you shall prevail. Deeply touching, yet, sad. If that was your intent, you succeeded beyond your wildest dreams!
posted by
metalrat
on March 8, 2008 at 3:11 PM
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MY
posted by
Troosha
on March 8, 2008 at 2:30 PM
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