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                Vewry scary poem but extremely well written.  Loved the imagery and the flow of it, smooth and to the point.   Frightening concept but well done  
 
  
                
                    posted by
                    Sinome
                     on March 8, 2008 at 9:18 PM
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                    wow
                
                absolutlely chilling.... I loved it
 
  
                
                    posted by
                    Loribeth215
                     on March 8, 2008 at 6:17 PM
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                I am so glad I put my treasures in Heaven! Great poem of caution!  sam  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on March 8, 2008 at 2:57 PM
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