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Kaz,
Great writing, though, I hope you're okay.
posted by
SpitFire70
on March 8, 2008 at 8:25 PM
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Oh this makes me want to light a pure white candle...for you, for me, for any and all~ Your poetry has a way of defining moments and tipping a readers heart ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 8, 2008 at 6:30 PM
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Great poem, excellent flow and thought provoking questions. Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on March 8, 2008 at 3:12 PM
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Poignant!
I like how each sentence gets progressively longer, like "the dark night of the soul" gets longer. Nice job!
posted by
metalrat
on March 8, 2008 at 12:43 PM
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kayzzaman dear.........
such sadness bringing out the great poet in you dear one...these are precious!
I am waiting for the wind to blow the heat off me
The veiled shadow casting a gloomy sun over my sky
How far is the heaven, how far is the dawn from the dusk?
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 8, 2008 at 8:28 AM
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Light The Candle For Me
My friend, the candle is always lit; IMO it's up to each of us to find its quiet glow. joab
posted by
joab1
on March 8, 2008 at 7:41 AM
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The dawn is MUCH further if you don't sleep. Take a TEMPORARY nap. Things
will improve some day, or at least the pain will lessen, eventually.
posted by
WindTapper
on March 8, 2008 at 6:39 AM
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Nicely written
Great imagery here
posted by
NightMajik
on March 8, 2008 at 6:38 AM
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The imagery and the emotion are stunning! I am so loving these poems Kaz! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 8, 2008 at 6:20 AM
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Dawn from dusk is only 12 hours, so you are ok
posted by
star4sky5
on March 8, 2008 at 5:21 AM
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Dawn from dusk is only 12 hours, so you are ok
posted by
star4sky5
on March 8, 2008 at 5:21 AM
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Dawn from dusk is only 12 hours, so you are ok
posted by
star4sky5
on March 8, 2008 at 5:21 AM
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So melancholic and beautiful!
posted by
Ariala
on March 8, 2008 at 4:49 AM
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