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Wonderful
This is really beautiful, thanks for painting such a lovely picture

posted by NightMajik on March 8, 2008 at 6:43 AM | link to this | reply

I want to go with you too!  sam

posted by sam444 on March 8, 2008 at 4:52 AM | link to this | reply

Shoulda chosen the upward climb! But hey, its all good!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 7, 2008 at 9:07 PM | link to this | reply

It's palpable, the yearning.  This is a very eloquent and unique poem.  Such depth and poignant ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 7, 2008 at 8:47 PM | link to this | reply

ohhhhhhhh.....
i beg of you
take me there
always

posted by star4sky5 on March 7, 2008 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

How I would like
to go to where rainbows rest ... so beautifully said. This is a nice poem.

posted by flappergirl on March 7, 2008 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply