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Great haunting feel to this. I like the flow and imagery.. Great Job.
Thanks for stopping by earlier.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 7, 2008 at 8:23 AM
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I get this
feel like I have lived it.
posted by
flappergirl
on March 7, 2008 at 7:17 AM
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Oh this is powerful ... short and haunting ~
you never listen... Poet, this is so poignant ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 7, 2008 at 5:35 AM
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This has a rather haunting feel to it my friend
very well done; thank you
posted by
mariaki
on March 7, 2008 at 3:18 AM
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melancholy but well done
posted by
quietguy7
on March 7, 2008 at 2:20 AM
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Very nice work
so much to say and no one listening,
unheard expressions that mean so much.
thanks for letting us in for a peek.
the greatness poem was inspired by afzals poem greatness in a given situation.
glad you liked it.
posted by
twomany
on March 6, 2008 at 11:41 PM
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